Really good story, haven't read anything this good since the days of asstr.org. This could make a perfect scenario for a visual novel. I know this was not the plan but you really should continue it. Keep up the great work!
some paragraphs are weird/repeats? when she rides you and you put it as "rids you." Also the numbing cream section makes no sense to me. I look forward to chapter 2.
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Really good story, haven't read anything this good since the days of asstr.org. This could make a perfect scenario for a visual novel. I know this was not the plan but you really should continue it. Keep up the great work!
are you gonna continue this?
Fun start, what's next, how are you going to build an empire out of this?
Rids you is wrong, it should say rides you.
Any chance you would include some anal stuff?
uhh way too much shit too read also include visuals
some paragraphs are weird/repeats? when she rides you and you put it as "rids you." Also the numbing cream section makes no sense to me. I look forward to chapter 2.
Did some1 say milf?
Edit : Damn I'm Horny, Add some art on it man or get ai to make some art for u
I love this game so far but it does need more Chapters, please!
so far so good, i'm looking forward on future developments
this looks like it'll be really good keep it up
good start keep up the work